Glimpse of my autumn thoughts

I’m not really sure if I’ve posted this somewhere else before, but I like the roughness of it.

waiting for autumn,
i wear the cool-grays and float
to get lost in a bloated cloud
passing by,
waiting until it sheds—

i’m a droplet of her—

i’m a naked body
claiming to be the tree
and the leaf.

I really have no idea how “i” here got immediately from being a droplet to being a tree or/and a leaf. There’s something that should fill the void there, but I guess it’s all under the autumn theme. I dunno.

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~ by Núr on September 17, 2013.

2 Responses to “Glimpse of my autumn thoughts”

  1. “to get lost in a bloated cloud” – I love this :)


  2. Thank you so much for your comment. I do like this line too. I haven’t been spending my time polishing my poems, just coming up with spontaneous lines, mainly. Just to get my imagination – if I may say – flowing.


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